Homework

2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Do you ever skip breakfast? If so, how often and why? I always have a breakfast because I have to work everyday. However, sometimes I could not have a breakfast. There is one reason it is I woke up so late. As you know, breakfast is really important for us. It gives healthy when you have a breakfast. You should have a breakfast as you can as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Do you ever skip breakfast? If so, how often and why?

Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I always have a breakfast because I have to work everyday. However, sometimes I could not have a breakfast. There is one reason it is I woke up so late. As you know, breakfast is really important for us. It gives healthy when you have a breakfast. You should have a breakfast as you can as possible.

 


 

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I always have breakfast because I have to work every day. However, sometimes I could not have breakfast. One reason is that, I woke up so late. As you know, breakfast is really important for us. It helps us to be healthy. You should have breakfast every day if possible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 I actually added some information to it for you to have some knowledge and to be a bit more detailed.  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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