Homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Wow! Thank you for doing the homework again. ^_^ You are really a very good student and I commend you for that. I’m proud of your work today. Remember: Use whose to show possession; it is always followed by a noun.
T. Andi
Hello, Andi^^
>> Bingo! Correct. =)
I did homework again.
>>Bingo! Another correct.
Your feedback is great!!
>> Wow! You are really doing great.
Your sentences are very good words.
>> That’s good.
So I try to memorize to these.
>> So, I try to memorize them.
1. This is the bank which was robbed yesterday.
>> That’s right!
2. A boy who sister is in my class was in the bank at that time.
>> A boy whose sister is in my class was in the bank at that
time.
3. The man who robbed the bank had two pistols.
>> Exactly right!
4. He wore a mask who made him look like Mickey Mouse.
>> He wore a mask which made him look like Mickey Mouse.
5. He came with a friend whose waited outside in the car.
>> He came with a friend who waited outside in the car.
6. The woman who gave him the money was young.
>> Great! You did it again. =)
7. The bag which contained the money was yellow.
>> Another correct!
8. The people who were in the bank were very frightened.
>> Exactly right!
9. A man whose mobile was ringing did not know what to do.
>> Another good job [이름]!
10. A woman who daughter was crying tried to calm her.
>> A woman whose daughter was crying tried to calm her.
I confused this homework.
>> I am confused about this homework.
Thank you for your teaching.
>> Bingo! You are really doing great.
Byebye~~^^
>> Bye bye.
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