Homework^^

2019-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Andi^^ I did homework again. Your feedback is great!! Your sentences are very good words. So I try to memorize to these. 1. This is the bank which was robbed yesterday. 2. A boy who sister is in my class was in the bank at that time. 3. The man who robbed the bank had two pistols. 4. He wore a mask who made him look like Mickey Mouse. 5. He came with a friend whose waited outside in the car. 6. The woman who gave him the money was young. 7. The bag which contained the money was yellow. 8. The people who were in the bank were very frightened. 9. A man whose mobile was ringing did not know what to do. 10. A woman who daughter was crying tried to calm her. I confused this homework. Thank you for your teaching. Byebye~~^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Wow! Thank you for doing the homework again. ^_^ You are really a very good student and I commend you for that. I’m proud of your work today. Remember: Use whose to show possession; it is always followed by a noun.

T. Andi

Hello, Andi^^

>> Bingo! Correct. =)
I did homework again.

>>Bingo! Another correct.
Your feedback is great!!

>> Wow! You are really doing great.
Your sentences are very good words.

>> That’s good.
So I try to memorize to these.
>> So, I try to memorize them.
1. This is the bank which was robbed yesterday.

>> That’s right!
2. A boy who sister is in my class was in the bank at that time.

>> A boy whose sister is in my class was in the bank at that time.
3. The man who robbed the bank had two pistols.

>> Exactly right!
4. He wore a mask who made him look like Mickey Mouse.

>> He wore a mask which made him look like Mickey Mouse.
5. He came with a friend whose waited outside in the car.

>> He came with a friend who waited outside in the car.
6. The woman who gave him the money was young.

>> Great! You did it again. =)
7. The bag which contained the money was yellow.

>> Another correct!
8. The people who were in the bank were very frightened.

>> Exactly right!
9. A man whose mobile was ringing did not know what to do.

>> Another good job [이름]!
10. A woman who daughter was crying tried to calm her.
>> A woman whose daughter was crying tried to calm her.
I confused this homework.
>> I am confused about this homework.
Thank you for your teaching.
>> Bingo! You are really doing great.
Byebye~~^^

>> Bye bye.

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