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When I was 17 years old, I had an accident of car
An accident car was in my mom and my older sister and me
The accident was startled me but fortunately we got hurt a little bit
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m glad nothing extremely devastating happened to you despite the accident.
Please always take care of yourself. ^^
~~t. Ally
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When I was 17 years old, I had an accident of car
>> When I was 17, I had a car accident.
An accident car was in my mom and my older sister and me
>> It happened to me, my mom and my older sister.
The accident was startled me but fortunately we got hurt a little bit
>> The accident was startling for me, but fortunately we did not get seriously hurt.
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