homework
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What are the pros and cons of being a celebrity?
I do not want to be a celebrity because My life is not privacy. Always many pay atteation to your eyes. However, I thank. I will be able to earn money. I request to be for an appearance on TV.
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I do not want to be a celebrity because My life is not privacy.
>> I don\'t want to be a celebrity because I won\'t be able to have my privacy.
Always many pay atteation to your eyes.
>> Many eyes will pay attention to me.
However, I thank. I will be able to earn money. I request to be for an appearance on TV.
>> However I think I will be able to earn a lot of money if someone requests my appearance on TV.
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