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Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for this one. Honestly, I\'ve never seen a live musical before. Musical theaters are not that common in my city. However, I can imagine how amazing it would be like to see Broadway shows in person.
- T. Beth
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Because, the musical is a lived scene.
>>>> OR: It is because the musical is done live.
>>>> OR: Because they perform live in musicals.
Also, I hear a beautiful music song and spectacular performances.
>>>> OR: In addition, I could hear beautiful music and spectacular performances.
musical is more better concentration than movie theater.
>>>> Musical makes you concentrate better than the movie theater.
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