Homework

Hello [이름]!

I like your composition for today.

I think you should familiarize yourself with more descriptive words so you can express your thoughts in a better way.

There are a lot of terms that you can use to describe things and situations.^^

Keep practicing!

~~ Teacher Sharon

The advertisement showing to foreigner it. 

>> The advertisement showed a foreigner.
If it use that It have been to grow hair more and more.

>> It showed how using the product continuously could make your hair grow.
So the top of the head changed all black. 

>> The top of the head of the model changed into all black.
Amazing, That is what I am looking for.

>> It was amazing that it was what I was looking for.
It is advertisement of hair-care clinic.^^

>> It was an advertisement for a hair care clinic.