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2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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How often do you eat out? I used to eat out almost every day because I'm a business man, so I always had lunch or dinner outside. It was spent a lot of money and time. Nawadays, I usally bring lunch box from home. It's bother me but it saves money and time. Most of all it's clean and healthy. It's certainly good for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Hannah,

Thank you again for sharing your views in today’s homework question!

Have a marvelous Thursday and keep up the good work!

Teacher ELLY.

How often do you eat out?

I used to eat out almost every day because I\'m a business woman, so I always had lunch or dinner outside.

CORRECT!

or>>It was my habit before to eat out almost on a daily basis, because I\'m a business woman. So, I always ate lunch or dinner outside.

It was spent a lot of money and time.

>>It was a waste of a lot of money and time.

or>>I spent so much money and wasted a lot of precious hours.

Nawadays, I usally bring lunch box from home.

>>Nowadays, I usually bring my lunch box from home.

or>>These days, I normally bring a lunch box to work.

It\'s bother me but it saves money and time.

>>It\'s a bother to me, but it saves me some money and time.

or>>It\'s bothersome on my part, but I get to save money and my time.

Most of all, it\'s clean and healthy.

CORRECT!

or>>The most important thing about it is, it\'s clean and healthy.

It\'s certainly good for me.

CORRECT!

or>>It\'s unquestionably advantageous for me.

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