Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! =) Thank you for an almost perfect homework [이름]! You just forgot some words and the capitalization, but over all you answered your homework perfectly. You are one diligent student and you rock [이름]! Have a nice da ahead my dear.
Teacher Andi =)
Dear. Andi
>> Dear [Name],
Hello, Andi.
>> Correct. =)
There is homework of today. ^^
>> This is my homework for today.
1. we / a mountain / climb
Do we climb a mountain?
>> Bingo! You got it.
2. she / on a chair / sit
Does she sit on a chair?
>> Another Bingo!
3. my computer / crash
Does my computer crach?
>> Does my computer crash? (You got it right, it was just the
spelling.)
4. you / your bag / pack
Do you pack your bag?
>> It’s correct again!
5. she / poems / write
Does she write poems?
>> You’re really good at this [이름].
6. we / house / move
Do we move house?
>> Perfectly correct!
7. you / new gadgets / develop
Do you develop new gadgets?
>> Wow! You are really great at this.
8. they / computers / order
Do they order computers?
>> Bingo [이름]!
9. he / to our question / refer
Does refer to our question?
>> Does he refer to our question? (It’s correct, you just
forgot he. =))
10. Jane and Michael / their presents / swap
Do jane and Michael(they) swap their presents?
>> Do Jane and Michael swap their presents? (You got it right
again, you just forgot to capitalize Jane.)
Bye bye.
>> Correct! =) (In formal writing though, we don’t repeat words. =))
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