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2019-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I always forget my parents' birthday. So my mom or dad used to told me that today is my dad or my mom's birthday. And one day, I think I should know what day is my parents birthday without my parents' help. So I write my parents' birthday on my calendar, and also on my notepad. And I can't memorize it still.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

Please take note of the proper use of pronouns.

Make sure that there is a healthy balance in your use of words.

Take note of the suggested terms and expressions below.

I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I always forget my parents\' birthday.
>> Correct
So my mom or dad used to told me that today is my dad or my mom\'s birthday.
>> My mom or dad used to remind me of their birthday.
And one day, I think I should know what day is my parents birthday without my parents\' help.
>> One day, I know I would be able to remember my parents\' birthdays without their help.
So I write my parents\' birthday on my calendar, and also on my notepad.
>> So I write my parents\' birthdays on my calendar, and also on my notepad. 
And I can\'t memorize it still.

>> However, I still can\'t remember them.

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