Homework

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice? My parents are my hero. They always make sacrifices for me or us. they care me even they were hard working. It gives me one lesson. That is sacrifice. Even though they are tired, they will go to the work. In addition, they have a lot of experience so thay are wise, so they gave solution for me when I had a problem. For these reasons, I think they are heroes

강사 첨삭


Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

My parents are my hero. They always make sacrifices for me or us.
they care me even they were hard working. It gives me one lesson. That is sacrifice. Even though they are tired, they will go to the work.
In addition, they have a lot of experience so thay are wise, so they gave solution for me when I had a problem. For these reasons, I think they are heroes

 

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CORRECTIONS:

 

My parents are my hero. They always make sacrifices for me or us.
They
cared for me even when they were hard working. It gives me one lesson. That is sacrifice. Even though they are tired, they will go to work.
In addition, they have a lot of
experiences so they are wise. They gave solution for me when I had a problem. For these reasons, I think they are heroes.




 

 

** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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