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I think the most dangerous sport is rock climbing. Because even if we have a safety device, if we fall, we can get a big shock and serious injury.
The safest exercise is stretching. It is also a way to prepare for other dangerous situations and is a simple exercise at home
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Hi there Jenny!(\",)
Have you tried rock climbing? If not, would you like to? You did a good job in your first composition. Keep it up!(\",)
~Lynn
I think the most dangerous sport is rock climbing.
>> correct!
Because even if we have a safety device, if we fall, we can get a big shock and serious injury.
>> correct!
The safest exercise is stretching.
>> correct!
It is also a way to prepare for other dangerous situations and is a simple exercise at home
>> It is also a way to prepare for other strenuous activities and it is a simple exercise that you can do at home.
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