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2019-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Have you ever felt jealous of someone else\'s success? Of,course! I always felt jealous when someone sucess or reieve a good thing. Today,in the grauation day, one girl in our class recieve a lots of award. So, I hope to recieve a lot of award in the next graduation day. Also, I felt jealous in the home when my parents loves my sister than me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the essay. I appreciate your honesty. Motivate yourself to become successful, too.

Enjoy your weekend!

~T. Kelly^^

Have you ever felt jealous of someone else\'s success?
Of,course! I always felt jealous when someone sucess or reieve a good thing.

>> Of course! I always feel jealous when becomes successful or receive a good thing.
 Today,in the grauation day, one girl in our class recieve a lots of award.

>> Today, in our graduation ceremony, one girl received a lot of awards.
 So, I hope to recieve a lot of award in the next graduation day.

>> So, I hope to recieve a lot of awards on the next graduation day. 
 Also, I felt jealous in the home when my parents loves my sister than me.

>> Also, I feel jealous at home when my parents show they love my sister more than me. 

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