HOMEWORK

2019-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice? A. My hero is my mom. Qualities of my mom is love for me. Maybe I think most of child’s hero is their parents.

강사 첨삭

Hi Emily,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice?
Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:


My hero is my mom. Qualities of my mom is love for me. Maybe I think most of child’s hero is their parents.

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

My hero is my mom. One of the good qualities of my mom is her love for me. I think, most of child’s hero is their parents.

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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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