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2019-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think writing a script for our team project(making vidio) was the hardest thing I ever had to do. Other team wrote a script together, but in our team, I wrote a script alone. Most of the members just leave it to me and did nothing on writing a script except one! I was nearly mad because of the stress. Well, our team won a frist prize in our class, But I don't want to write a script anymore.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won

I hope I can read the script that you wrote.

I\'m always interested in your writing.

You did a good job today.

I\'m looking forward to our lessons next week.

I\'ll call you then!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think writing a script for our team project(making vidio) was the hardest thing I ever had to do.
>> I think writing a script for our team project (making a video) was the hardest thing I ever had to do.
Other team wrote a script together, but in our team, I wrote a script alone.
>> Other teams wrote a script together, but in our team, I wrote the script alone.
Most of the members just leave it to me and did nothing on writing a script except one!
>> Most of the members just left it up to me and did nothing on writing the script except for one!
I was nearly mad because of the stress.
>> Correct
Well, our team won a frist prize in our class, But I don\'t want to write a script anymore.

>> Well, our team won first prize in our class but I don\'t want to write a script anymore.

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