homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
That\'s very true. ^^
You can\'t help someone when you yourself have no knowledge about the situation.
I think you are a very nice and true friend. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I know that thing, then I will teach my friend.
>> If I have knowledge about the problem, then I will teach my friend.
If I don\'t know that thing, then I will solve it with my friend.
>> If I don\'t know a thing about it, the we will try to learn and solve it together.
I think when someone gives a piece of advice, the first thing is knowing about that problem.
>> I think, the key to giving good advice is to know what the problem is about.
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