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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

I want 2019 to be __________________. I want 2019 to be a wonderful experience. I will go another country that I\'ve never been. Before I go, I will meet friends in Korea. I hope that I can get many memories in Korea, bring those memories to Austrailia, and get another wonderful memories.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I\'m excited to hear about all your awesome experiences. ^^

~~t. Ally

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I want 2019 to be a wonderful experience.

>> CORRECT!

I will go another country that I\'ve never been.

>> I will go to another country, one that I have never been to.

Before I go, I will meet friends in Korea.

>> Before I leave, I will meet with my friends in Korea.

I hope that I can get many memories in Korea, bring those memories to Austrailia, and get another wonderful memories.

>> I hope that I can get a lot of memories in Korea, bring those memories to Australia and get even more wonderful memories there.

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