Homework

2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Q. What should you do when you’re groggy? A. First of all, I should take a rest. In my opinion, sleeping is a best way to take a rest. If I can\'t go to the bed immediately, for example because of a lot of tasks I have to do finish due that day, I should take a nap for a while instead.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you again for today’s homework!

I appreciate it a lot and keep up the good habit!

Talk to you then in a few minutes!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework:

Q. What should you do when you’re groggy?

 A. First of all, I should take a rest.

CORRECT!

or>>Initially, I need to get some rest.

In my opinion, sleeping is a best way to take a rest.

>>In my opinion, sleeping is the best way to take a rest.

or>>In my view, getting some sleep is the surest way to have enough rest.

If I can\'t go to the bed immediately, for example because of a lot of tasks I have to do finish due that day, I should take a nap for a while instead. 

>>If I can\'t go to bed immediately, for example, because of a lot of tasks I have to finish on that day, I should take a nap for a while instead. 

or>>If I am unable to get a really long sleep right away, because of some tasks due on that day, I then just take a quick nap instead. 

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