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That\'s very interesting! ^^
Thank you for sending this composition.
I learned some facts from it.
~~t. Ally
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The day is special because it means the new year is really start.
>> That day is special because it means that the new year has really begun.
In Korea, after the Lunar New Year the Chinese zodiac sign is change.
>> In Korea, after the Lune New Year, the Chinese zodiac sign changes.
Before the Japanese occupation, there is only one new Year in Korea.
>> Before the Japanese colonization, there was only one New Year in Korea.
After the period, we celebrate both new Year, but originally new Year is Lunar New Year.
>> But after that period, we started celebrating both New Years. But originally, our new year was simply the Lunar New Year.
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