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What are some of the greatest technological achievements? Why?
The greatest technoloogical achievements in Korea is Lotte Tower.
>> The greatest technoloogical achievement in Korea is Lotte Tower.
Lotte tower is fifth tallest building in the world!
>> Lotte tower is the fifth tallest building in the world!
I went to this place many time, I alway think this building is using of lots of technology.
>> I went to this place many times, I always think that this building is using lots of technology.
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