Homework

2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear. Andi Hello:) How was your weekend? I had great time with my family. But I little bit tired. And I will get my family photos on thursday. If I receive these photo, I will show photos to you. This is my homework. 1. Mr. [Name] is from Ireland, isn\'t he? 2. The car isn\'t in the garage, is it? 3. You are John, aren’t you? 4. She went to the library yesterday, wasn’t she?? 5. He didn\'t recognize me, did he? 6. Cars pollute the environment, aren’t they? 7. Mr. [Name] has been to Scotland recently, isn’t it? 8. The trip is very expensive, isn’t it? 9. He won\'t tell her, is he? 10. Hugh had a red car, isn’t he? Bye bye.

강사 첨삭

 

Good morning dear [이름]! Wow, it’s Monday again. I am happy you had a wonderful weekend with your family. My weekend was not so exciting. I just stayed home and took care of my daughter. =) I am looking forward to those family photos. And I hope you find the time to rest. Talk to you later my dear.

 

PS

Just be careful of your punctuation and capitalization.

Teacher Andi =)

 

Dear. Andi

>> Dear [Name],
Hello:)

>> Correct and hello to you too. =)
How was your weekend?

>> Bingo!
I had great time with my family.

>> I had a great time with my family.
But I little bit tired.

>> But I am a little bit tired.
And I will get my family photos on thursday.

>> And I will get my family photos on Thursday.
If I receive these photo, I will show photos to you.
>> If I receive these photos, I will show the photos to you.

>> or: If I get the photos, I will show them to you.
This is my homework.
>> Excellent [이름]!
1. Mr. [Name] is from Ireland, isn\'t he?

>> Correct!
2. The car isn\'t in the garage, is it?

>> Super! You are doing great.
3. You are John, aren’t you?

>> Excellent!
4. She went to the library yesterday, wasn’t she??

>> She went to the library yesterday, didn’t she?
5. He didn\'t recognize me, did he?

>> Wow! You are really good at this.
6. Cars pollute the environment, aren’t they?

>> Cars pollute the environment, don’t they?
7. Mr. [Name] has been to Scotland recently, isn’t it?

>> Mr. [Name] has been to Scotland recently, hasn’t he?
8. The trip is very expensive, isn’t it?

>> Bingo again!
9. He won\'t tell her, is he?

>> He won’t tell her, will he?
10. Hugh had a red car, isn’t he?

>> Hugh had a red car, didn’t he?
Bye bye.

>> Correct! (But again, in formal writing, we don’t repeat words.)

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