homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like the fact that I could understand the idea that you wanted to express.
It means that you have a goo sense in choosing the right words and expressions.
We are going to work on your skills in sentences construction.
We need to focus on sentence patterns.
Let\'s work hard!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I envy her for hers a talent.
>> I envy her for her talent.
She is great through to tried to find hers dream than the love.
>> She is great when she chose to fulfill her dream over love.
I think that she was amazing that has been living alone without not marry.
>> I think that she\'s amazing for living alone without getting married.
She looks good at a long hair although she is old.
>> She looks good with long hair although she\'s old.
I has been respecting that she had not been eating meat because of hers beautiful voice.
>> I also respect the fact that she doesn\'t eat meat to maintain her beautiful voice.
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