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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I envy her for hers a talent. 2. She is great through to tried to find hers dream than the love. 3. I think that she was amazing that has been living alone without not marry. 4. She looks good at a long hair although she is old. 5. I has been respecting that she had not been eating meat because of hers beautiful voice.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I like the fact that I could understand the idea that you wanted to express.

It means that you have a goo sense in choosing the right words and expressions.

We are going to work on your skills in sentences construction.

We need to focus on sentence patterns.

Let\'s work hard!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I envy her for hers a talent.

>> I envy her for her talent.
She is great through to tried to find hers dream than the love.

>> She is great when she chose to fulfill her dream over love.
I think that she was amazing that has been living alone without not marry.

>> I think that she\'s amazing for living alone without getting married.
She looks good at a long hair although she is old.

>> She looks good with long hair although she\'s old.
I has been respecting that she had not been eating meat because of hers beautiful voice.

>> I also respect the fact that she doesn\'t eat meat to maintain her beautiful voice.

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