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Until now, I have had many good and bad experience.

>> Until now, I have been experiencing a lot of good and bad things.

I am not satisfied with life.

>> I am not satisfied with my life.

My life is full of mistakes.

>> My life is full of mistakes.

but When my daughter was borned, my think change.

>>  When my daughter was born, my thoughts changed.

I should live differently now.

>> correct!

so, I started a little business with my wife.

>> correct!

or:

>> So, I started a little business with my wife.

I think in my own big change is motive.

>> I think change is my biggest motivation.