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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Can you tell me about the hardest thing you ever had to do? I think hardest tings that it was bear my son. Because It is first experience. The Pregnant need many careful. I worked 9 month that pregnancy. So The Birth give to me a happiness but it is difficult to way and need to brave

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for your work today.

I need you to take note of the correct sentence patterns suggested.

I hope you practice them and make better sentences next time.

You are very hardworking and I appreciate that.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think hardest tings that it was bear my son.

>> I think the hardest thing that I had to do was giving birth to my son.
Because It is first experience.

>> He was my first child and I have never experienced something like that before.
The Pregnant need many careful.

>> Pregnant women really need to be careful.
I worked 9 month that pregnancy.

>> I worked for 9 months during the pregnancy.
So The Birth give to me a happiness but it is difficult to way and need to brave

>> Giving birth to my son gave me happiness even if it was difficult and I needed to be brave.

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