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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I think they are different. Well, at least what they usually do is different. So I think what they think is different too. And that makes children are different today from 50 years ago. But my dad just said they are not different, so now I don\'t know they are different or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Please give special attention to the position of modifiers.

They must be next to the words they are describing.

Please ask questions about the corrections.

We\'ll talk about them in class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think they are different.
>> Correct
Well, at least what they usually do is different.
>> Correct
So I think what they think is different too.
>> So, I think that what they think is different too.
And that makes children are different today from 50 years ago.
>> That makes children today different from those 50 years ago.
But my dad just said they are not different, so now I don\'t know they are different or not.

>> However, my dad just said that they are not different, so now, I don\'t know whether they are different or not.

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