Homework

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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what do you up to this weekend? I will go to KoSung in korea. My nephew's there for traning because he wants to be a soccer player, so I will go and see training. KoSung is really far from Hanam. It may take 3 hours. Anyway I will go to KoSung with my family. After getting home, I am going to rest all day.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What do you up to this weekend?

 

Answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I will go to KoSung in korea. My nephew\'s there for traning because he wants to be a soccer player, so I will go and see training.
KoSung is really far from Hanam. It may take 3 hours. Anyway I will go to KoSung with my family. After getting home, I am going to rest all day.

 


 

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I will go to KoSung in Korea. My nephew\'s there for a training because he wants to be a soccer player. I will go and see him train.
KoSung is really far from Hanam. It may take 3 hours. Anyway
, I will go to KoSung with my family. After getting back home, I am going to rest all day.

 

 

 

 

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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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