homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for submitting your homework and for sharing your thoughts about it. I\'m glad that you have found the beauty and advantages in having some changes in our life. ^^
~Teacher Gina
It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
For the past few years I have been living a monotonous life without change.
I was only willing to try something new, but I never did.
Recently, I have gained the vitality of my life by studying English and yoga.
And I also travel to a nearby place with my husband.
Change gives me vitality and I can work more passionately.
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>> OR: It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
For the past few years I have been living a life without variety.
I was only willing to try something new, but I never did.
Recently, I have gained a new source of strength from studying English and yoga.
And I also travel to nearby places with my husband.
Change gives me vitality and I can work more passionately.
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