homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening!
Thank you for sharing your opinion about this. I truly appreciate it. ^^
~Teacher Gina
The Earth is suffering from global warming due to the excessive use of oil and gas.
The Arctic ice sheet has melted due to global warming and ecosystem is also at risk.
There are advantages of developing industry and disadvantages of generating pollution and pollution.
New clean energy must be developed to keep Earth and humanity healthy.
>> The Earth is suffering from global warming due to the excessive use of oil and gas.
The Arctic ice sheet has melted due to global warming and the ecosystem is also at risk.
A developing industry has advantages and disadvantages of generating pollution.
A new and clean energy must be developed to keep the Earth and humanity healthy.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.