Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What are the pros and cons of keeping a pet?
Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I
have a dog, so I think keeping a pet is benefit.
You will not feel lonely because of pet. In addition, You can meet new
people when you take a walk with your pet. Finally, you will have a
responsibility. Also, there are drawback. You have to take a shower your
pet and you have to clean up like pee or poop. These things are annoying.
CORRECTIONS:
I
have a dog, so I think keeping a pet is beneficial.
You will not feel lonely because of a pet.
In addition, you can meet new people when
you take a walk with your pet. However, you will have a responsibility.
Also, there are drawbacks.
You have to shower your
pet and you have to clean their
pee or poop. These
things are annoying.
.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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