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2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Do you think it\'s better to save money in the bank or to invest it in something? I think to invest it in something is better than to save money in the bank . because of investing is certainly saved many money. of course, saving money in the bank is stable. but this method is not saved many money. because nowadays, interest is lowed.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I also agree that investing is a good idea. However, you have to be careful with what you invest on.

- T. Beth

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I think to invest it in something is better than to save money in the bank .
>>>  CORRECT.
because of investing is certainly saved many money.
>>>  Because investing can certainly help earn more money.
of course, saving money in the bank is stable. but this method is not saved many money.
>>>  Of course, saving money in the bank is stable but this method would not help you earn a lot of money.
because nowadays, interest is lowed.

>>> Because nowadays, the interest is low.

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