Homework

2019-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do? I have a bad experience about bad weather. I do not like fine dust. It makes me bad. When there is fine dust outside, I do not like to go out, so I stay at home. I turned on air conditional and I closed all the windows. Finally, I took a rest in my bed after studying English.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do?

Answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I have a bad experience about bad weather. I do not like fine dust. It makes me bad. When there is fine dust outside, I do not like to go out, so I stay at home. I turned on air conditional and I closed all the windows.
Finally, I took a rest in my bed after studying English.

 

 

 

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I have a bad experience about bad weather. I do not like fine dust. It makes me feel bad. When there is fine dust outside, I do not like to go out. I just stay at home. I turn on the air conditioner and I close all the windows.
Lastly, I
take a rest in my bed after studying English.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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 ** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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