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Hello [이름]! Thank you for the effort of sending this in. This sounds great. Europe is really a great place. There are many places to visit there as well. I hope to go there someday too.
- T. Beth
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I want to travel in Europe again.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: I want to travel to Europe again.
Two years ago, I traveled some country in Europe with my some friends.
>>> Two years ago, I traveled to some countries in Europe with some of my friends.
We visited art biennale held in Germany and Venice, and went to many art galleries and museums.
>>> CORRECT.
That was really exciting. But there was one thing that was lacking.
>>> CORRECT.
We couldn’t see a lot of tourist attractions because we had to see a exhibition.
>>> We couldn’t see a lot of tourist attractions because we had to see an exhibition.
So if I have a chance to travel in Europe, I want to go a tourist attractions and a place to rest such as beach, park and mountain.
>>>So if I have a chance to travel to Europe, I want to go to tourist attractions and a place to rest such as beach, park and mountain.
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