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Homework
Q. Where is the hottest area in your country?
A. Daegu is the hottest city in Korea.
CORRECT!
or>>The hottest city in Korea is Daegu.
It is called Dea-frica because it is hot as much as in Africa.
CORRECT!
or>>They termed it Dea-frica, because it is as hot as in Africa.
The reason why it is so hot is its topographic characteristic.
>>The reason why it is so hot is, because of its topographic characteristic.
It is a basin so the high temperature is maintained.
CORRECT!
or>>Its high temperature is consistent, because it is shaped like a basin.
I hope people in Daegu are safe from the hot.
>>I hope that the people in Daegu are safe from the heat.
or>>I hope that they are safe from the hot sun in Daegu.
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