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2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Are you a sports fanatic? What kind of sport are you into? I like a soccer. Actually, I like a soccer\'s cheering. Al l people become one mind and fun. they sing to same cheering song, one of my favorites reason is a bit easy role. And It is interesting , to see a famous soccer player .

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I heard about Korea\'s unique and interesting fandom. I\'ve seen how sports fans cheer for their team on some Korean TV shows I\'ve watched. It\'s really amusing how fans sing along to the same song.

- T. Beth

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I like a soccer.
>>> I like soccer.

Actually, I like a soccer\'s cheering.
>>> Actually, I like the soccer game\'s cheering.
Al l people become one mind and fun.
>>> All people unite and have fun.
they sing to same cheering song,
>>>  They sing to the same cheering song.
one of my favorites reason is a bit easy role.
>>> One of my favorite reason is the role is a bit easy.
And It is interesting , to see a famous soccer player .

>>> CORRECT. (And it is interesting to see a famous soccer player.)

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