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Q.Do you think religion is important in our life? why or why not?
I think that religion is important.
also, right religion believing is veryimportant.
I am believing christianity.
Becuse Jesus is always help me when I have hard time and sad time.
also,Jesus is pleasure torether when Iam pleasure.
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I think that religion is important.
>> I think religion is important.
also, right religion believing is veryimportant.
>> Also, believing in the right religion is very important.
I am believing christianity.
>> I am believing in Christianity.
Becuse Jesus is always help me when I have hard time and sad time.
>> Jesus always help me when I have a hard and sad time.
also,Jesus is pleasure torether when Iam pleasure.
>> Also, Jesus will be happy if I am happy.
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