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2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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Last year,I went to guam with my family .At that time my family stayed at a resort called PIC for four days.

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Last year,I went to guam with my family .

>> Last year, I went to Guam with my family.

At that time my family stayed at a resort called PIC for four days.

>>>At that time, my family stayed in a resort.

The name of the resort is PIC.

We stayed there for 4 days.


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