homework

2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns? I think the first one is traffic problem. Threre are so many cars. So every morning and evening, there is always traffic jam. Air polution is serious as well. The smoke of vehicles spoil the air. But I don\'t think the government should encourage people. It is up to the people. But I think the government has to make some regulation for the environment.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]!

Pollution truly is one of the biggest problems that the world has nowadays.

I like your answer to this homework. ^^

It is very insightful.

~~ t. Ally

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I think the first one is traffic problem.

>>I think the first problem is the traffic.

Threre are so many cars.

>> There are so many cars.

So every morning and evening, there is always traffic jam.

>> So every morning and evening, there is always a traffic jam.

Air polution is serious as well.

>> Air pollution is a serious issue as well.

The smoke of vehicles spoil the air.

>> The smoke of the vehicles contaminate the fresh air.

But I don\'t think the government should encourage people.

>> CORRECT!

It is up to the people.

>> CORRECT!

But I think the government has to make some regulation for the environment.

>> I think, the government should make some rules and regulations for the benefit of the environment.

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