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2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Last weekend,Iwent to the library. 2. I went to the strawberry farm. 3. I want to go to the strawberry farm. 4. I like sour taste. 5. Strawberrys are the only fruit. 6. I'm outside and my Dad was inside. 7. I piking in the one row. 8. Next time,I will choose thet. 9. I'm usually piking!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!
Jean



1. Last weekend,Iwent to the library.

>>  Last weekend, I went to the library.

>> or: I went to the library last weekend.

 2. I went to the strawberry farm.

>> correct ~~

 3. I want to go to the strawberry farm. 

>> correct ~~

 4. I like sour taste.

>> correct ~~

 5. Strawberrys are the only fruit.

>> Strawberry is the only fruit that I like.

 6. I\'m outside and my Dad was inside.

>> I\'m outside and my dad is inside.

 7. I piking in the one row.

>> I\'m picking strawberries in one row.

 8. Next time,I will choose thet.
>> Next time, I will choose that. 

>> or: I will choose that next time.
 

9. I\'m usually piking!!!

>> I\'m usually picking the food that I like.



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