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Thanks for writing this Miss [이름]!
I am wondering about the time when you face a challenge. It would have been better if you included it in your answer.
Anyway, I\'ll hear it directly from you in class. Haha! See you! C\")
~Teache Shanee^^,
Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure . How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
It is hard to control my feelings when I face a challenge, setback, or failure.
If i can\'t overcome the situation, I will be afraid of it whenever having the same situation.
>>> If I can\'t overcome a situation, I will be afraid to face it whenever I have the same situation.
But if I get over it, I can be more confident.
I can learn many things from it.
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