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What is your favorite Korean dish? What makes it special?
My favorite Korean dish is Samgyetang.
It is chicken soup and there are so many ingredients like ginseng, sticky rice, jujub etc.
The ingredients are very good for health, so many Koreans and I like to eat Samgyetang
Many people eat this food in summer because for the hot weather, inside of our body become cold.
So hot dishes are good for protect our organs.
My favorite Korean dish is Samgyetang. It is a chicken soup and there are many ingredients like ginseng, sticky rice, jujub etc.
These ingredients are really good for our health, so many Koreans including me like to eat Samgyetang. Many people eat this in summer because of the warm weather, when we eat this food our body temperature becomes lower so hot dishes are good to protect our organs.
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