Homework
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Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What is the most shocking advertisement you have seen?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I can not remember well. However, I can
remember one about cigarette.
It was really shocked to me. I will explain that advertisement. There are
a lot of people in the advertisement. A man smoked. It showed a scene a
cigarette broke their lungs. It was shocked to me. It was terrible, so I
hate people who smoke in public place
CORRECTIONS:
I cannot remember well. However, I can remember one about cigarette.
It really shocked me. I will explain
that advertisement. There are a lot of people in the advertisement. A man smokes. It showed a scene where a cigarette damages their lungs. It was a shock to me. It was terrible, so I hate people
who smoke in public places.
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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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