Homework

Q. Where do you get your energy from? A. I usually get my energy from my friends and family, especially when I get tired of studying. They encourage me by heart-warming words. Also, they treat me delicious food to give me some energy. Especially, my best friend Jihee sometimes come to my academic class to have a meal with me. I can get much energy and relieve stress by hearing encouring words from her.

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Homework

Q. Where do you get your energy from?

A. I usually get my energy from my friends and family, especially when I get tired of studying.

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or>> I mostly get energized by my friends and family with their positive words of encouragement, especially when I get exhausted from studying.

They encourage me by heart-warming words.

>>They encourage me with their heart-warming words.

Also, they treat me delicious food to give me some energy.

>>Also, they treat me to a variety of delicious food to give me some energy.

or>>In addition, they feed me with very delicious foods just to get me going.

Especially, my best friend Jihee sometimes come to my academic class to have a meal with me.

>>Especially, my best friend Jihee, she sometimes comes to my academy just to have a meal with me.

I can get much energy and relieve stress by hearing encouring words from her. 

>>I get energized a lot and even relieve my stress by just hearing encouraging words from her.