homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
> Why is English fluency significant for you?
Because I like traveling and I want to have a natural conversation in English with my Beth teacher!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]! Thank you for the effort of sending this. Keep it up. Every thing is possible as long as you work hard on it. I hope to be fluent in Korean as well.
- T. Beth
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Because I like traveling and I want to have a natural conversation in English with my Beth teacher!!
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: It is because I like traveling and I would like to have a natural conversation with teacher Beth!
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