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If I could make my own movie, it would be about that the person get along with animals
That is a cartoon\'s story
Recently I saw a cartoon on the internet
That is impressive for me
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Hi [이름]!
That would be a very cute movie. ^^
I remember your story about that cartoon.
I would love to see it too!
~~t. Ally
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If I could make my own movie, it would be about that the person get along with animals
>> If I could make my own movie, it would be about the person who could get along with animals.
That is a cartoon\'s story
>> That\'s a story from a cartoon.
Recently I saw a cartoon on the internet
>> Recently, I saw a cartoon on the internet.
That is impressive for me
>> I was very impressed by it.
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