Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, I\'m [이름]. The first class with you was really good. And I enjoyed a class. So I think I can learn some English skills and also I can have a great time with you. I already waiting for your class!! Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You are truly a sweet girl.
I\'m glad you\'re in my class.
You are talented in making sentences.
I love your composition today.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hi, I\'m [이름].
>> Correct
The first class with you was really good.
>> Correct
And I enjoyed a class.
>> I really enjoyed the class.
So I think I can learn some English skills and also I can have a great time with you.
>> That\'s why I can develop my English skills and also have a great time with you.
I already waiting for your class!!
>> I\'m already waiting for our next class!
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