Homework

2019-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Andi. This is the homework. Thank you. 1. My name is [Name]. I am [Name], and this is my family. 2. My mum\'s name is Angie. She is from Germany. 3. Bob is my dad . He is a waiter. 4. On the left you can see Simon. He is my brother. 5. They are twins. 6. Our dog is a girl, Judy. She is two years old. 7. They live in Canterbury. 8. There is not far from London. 9. My grandparents live in London. They often come to see us. 10. What can you tell me about your family?

강사 첨삭

A wonderful Wednesday to you [이름]! Thank you for the homework. I am so happy whenever I receive your homework because, I know you are working hard to achieve your goals. Talk to you later. Ciao!

Teacher Andi =)

Hello, Andi.

>> Hello Andi,
This is the homework.

>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct. Thank you to you too. =)
1. My name is [Name]. I am [Name], and this is my family.

>> Excellent!
2. My mum\'s name is Angie. She is from Germany.

>> Correct again!
3. Bob is my dad. He is a waiter.

>> Excellent!
4. On the left you can see Simon. He is my brother.

>> You got it right!
5. They are twins.

>> Good job!
6. Our dog is a girl, Judy. She is two years old.

>> Perfect!
7. They live in Canterbury.

>> You are really good at this [이름]!
8. There is not far from London.

>> It is not far from London.
9. My grandparents live in London. They often come to see us.

>> Correct!
10. What can you tell me about your family?

>> You are really god at this. I am proud of you [이름]!

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