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Hi [이름]h! Using artificial reproduction technology is becoming known now in the world. We have this so-called IVF or In Vitro Fertilization. It is VERY expensive that I think

only rich people can afford this in the Philippines. Honestly, I have thought of adopting a baby but my husband didn\'t agree. It crossed to my mind because I really want

to have a baby. Although, my husband and I have already talked to a doctor but we stopped having consultations because I am starting lose hope of conceiving a baby.

You are lucky. You have a beautiful daughter. I know how grateful and proud you are of having such a precious child in your beautiful family. ^^

~~May~~

I think it is preferable to use artificial reproduction technology first because to adopt a child is very difficult and required many considerations specially in a country like Korea where people think that it is very important to carry on a family line with their own linage.

>> I think it is preferable to use artificial reproduction technology because to adopt a child is very difficult and there are a lot of things you need to consider.

In a country like Korea, people think that it is very important to carry on a family line with their own LINEAGE.

(Your first sentence is too long so I divided it into two.)

So Open adoption is rare except for special cases in Korea.

>> So an open adoption is rare except for special cases in Korea.

There are many tragical stories about teenagers who commit misdeeds after they know in their adolescence that their parents are not biological parents but adoptive parents.

>> Correct

Or >> There are many tragical stories about teenagers who became rebellious after knowing that their parents are not actually their biological parents.

But nowadays celebrities choose to adopt a child in public and it makes differences in people’s mind about adoption.

>> But nowadays celebrities choose to adopt a child and make known to the public and it makes differences in people’s mind about adoption.