Homework (87)

Hello there, [이름].

Grammar is really very important, so we need to remember it all the time.

Love is the best gift we can give to everybody.

Take care and have a nice day in school.

T. Jeny

ESSAY: What are the positive and negative effects of texting?
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Texting can be evidence when we face a problem.

>>Texting can be a piece of evidence when we are facing a problem.
 For example, sometimes, boss criticize a person why he brought the bad outcome, although he had followed boss\'s order well.

>>For example, when a boss criticized a person for having a bad outcome although he just followed the boss\' order well.

At that time, he is able to use the texting receiving by his boss as an evidence.
>>In this case he can use the messages as evidence.
It use to work to the positive way since his boos will stop chasing him.

>>It can be used in a positive way since his boss will stop chasing him.

But, after that time passes, his boss might avenge to the other ways.

>>But the boss could also avenge in other ways after some time.

So it works negative way at the same time.
>>So it works in a negative way at the same time.
To use texting works to the good way when people express their feeling.

>>Texting could also be in a good way for people to express their feelings.

While they are press the buttons, they can think deeply and make their sentence simply or sincerely.
>>While they are pressing the buttons then they can deeply think and make their sentences simple and sincere.
However, using texting is not a good way when a guys express his feeling to his lover.

>>However texting couldn\'t be a good way for guys to express their feelings to the person their courting.

If he wants to start a serious relationship with his further girl friend, he should avoid using message.

>>If he wants to start a serious relationship with his future girlfriend, he should avoid sending messages.

It\'s because woman doesn\'t like that kind of way to be proposed.

>>It\'s because women don\'t like that kind of way to be courted.

 It is 99 percent to be failed if he is not too handsome.

>> It is 99 percent a failure if he is not too handsome.