Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Charlie,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Do you like riding a bicycle?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I
like riding a bicyle but I do not have a bicyle. If I want to ride, I will
rend it. I have road a bicyle in Han river. It was really great.
It makes me comfortable and riding a bicyle relieves stress.In addition, It
is good for health. However, I can not ride a bicyle because of fine dust.
I hope the fine dust to disappear.
CORRECTIONS:
I
like riding a bicycle
but I do not have a bicycle. If I want to ride one, I need to rent it. I have ridden a bicycle in Han river. It was really
great!
It makes me comfortable and riding a bicycle relieves
stress. In addition, it is good for the health. However, I cannot ride a bicycle because of the fine dust. I hope the fine
dust will
eventually disappear.
** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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