Homework

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Andi. My husband and my daughter went to bed. I did the homework alone. Hahaha I want to write the good message like you. I think you\'ll understand me. This is the homework. 1. Where are your friends now? 2. Here is a postcard from my friend Peggy. 3. She lives in Australia now with her family. 4. Her husband works in Newcastle. 5. His company builds ships. 6. Their children go to school in Newcastle. 7. My husband and I want to go to Australia, too. 8. We want to see Peggy and her family next winter. 9. Us winter! 10. Because it is their summer.

강사 첨삭

A tantalizing and thrilling Thursday to you my dear [이름]! Your diligence and perseverance to be better is paying off. You only made one mistake in your homework and that’s an astounding achievement. Be positive always and you’ll succeed. Talk to you later. Ciao!

Teacher Andi =)

 

Hello, Andi.

>> Hello Andi, (Hello to you too. ^_^)
My husband and my daughter went to bed.

>> Correct! (Did they go to bed early?)
I did the homework alone. Hahaha

>> Perfect! (Thank you for doing it again. ^_^)
I want to write the good message like you.

>> Correct!

>> or: I want to write a good message like you. (You are beginning [이름], as the day goes by, you’re becoming better. )
I think you\'ll understand me.
>> Correct! (Yes, I understand you.)
This is the homework.

>> Perfect!
1. Where are your friends now?

>> Correct!
2. Here is a postcard from my friend Peggy.

>> Bingo!
3. She lives in Australia now with her family.

>> Excellent!
4. Her husband works in Newcastle.

>> Good job!
5. His company builds ships.

>> You are doing great!
6. Their children go to school in Newcastle.

>> Superb!
7. My husband and I want to go to Australia, too.

>> A big check mark!
8. We want to see Peggy and her family next winter.

>> Excellent!
9. Us winter!

>> Our winter.
10. Because it is their summer.

>> You are really good at this! =)

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