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2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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When do you usually have a family reunion? I have a family reunion on big holiday. Korea is a big holiday twice a year. Or When my sister come in from Japan to Korea , one of family important thing happen, Then day my family meet together.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you so much for sending this in. I heard about the biggest holidays in your country, Chuseok and Seollal. Family gatherings can be fun.

- T. Beth

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I have a family reunion on big holiday.
>>> I have a family reunion on big holidays.     
Korea is a big holiday twice a year.
>>> Korea has two big holidays in a year.  

Or When my sister come in from Japan to Korea , one of family important thing happen, 
>>> We also gather together when my sister comes to Korea from Japan. That is one important event for my family.  
Then day my family meet together.

>>> On that day, we meet together. 

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