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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you so much for sending this in. I heard about the biggest holidays in your country, Chuseok and Seollal. Family gatherings can be fun.
- T. Beth
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I have a family reunion on big holiday.
>>> I have a family reunion on big holidays.
Korea is a big holiday twice a year.
>>> Korea has two big holidays in a year.
Or When my sister come in from Japan to Korea , one of family important thing happen,
>>> We also gather together when my sister comes to Korea from Japan. That is one important event for my family.
Then day my family meet together.
>>> On that day, we meet together.
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